Followers of my twitter feed will remember that, in August, I posted a cryptic reference to some good news concerning my writing:
I can finally reveal what that news is.
My short story, ‘Half-mown Lawn,’ a longer, more developed version of a flash fiction I wrote for #fridayflash has won the 2010 Yeovil Literary Prize Short Fiction Category. I developed the extended story as part of my Open University Creative Writing Diploma.
Over on the website they have presented the judge’s comments.
Judge, Francine Lee, says about “Half Mown Lawn”: Beautifully crafted, never sentimental or maudlin, we follow Annie in the first few days after her husband’s sudden death as she adjusts to life without him.
There is little dialogue but what there is adds to the restraint of the story. The author uses spare, crisp language to explore Annie’s stunned reaction as she goes shopping with her amended list and her ‘bags for life’.
The deft description and attention to the smallest of details, such as the Ikea pencil she finds in her pocket, define the character and her life. The deeply satisfying ending stayed with me for a long time after reading. An everyday subject lifted out of the mundane by the sheer quality of the writing
I have been itching to share the news with you since receiving the email last month. Being recognised in a prize is a great feeling. Actually winning one is a thrilling thing to find out. Really pleased and still buzzing about this.
23 Responses to My long awaited news.
That’s excellent news, Dan. Well done and congratulations. Is there somewhere we can read this piece of fiction?
Yea Dan! Excellent, excellent news. Well done.
Well deserved, Dan. You really are a fantastic writer, more so because you fit the whole thing around being an awesome dad.
Congratulations! Well deserved.
What wonderful news! Huge congratulations, Dan! Really, really thrilled for you.
Huzzah!
Nik
Thanks guys.
@Chris – It’s currently submitted for possible publication as the Yeovil Prize doesn’t publish the winning entries. I’ll email you a copy so you can have a read, mate.
@Greg – shucks. You make me blush via the tubes of the interweb. Not easily done.
Congratulations, Dan.
Congrats! That’s huge news – I’m surprised you didn’t burst at the seams with having to wait so long to share it!
@Trevor – thanks very much.
@ Laura – It was a close call at times.
@ Nik – Huzzah! Indeed. Thanks for the congrats.
That’s awesome news Dan, well done! I knew it had to be something big. Well deserved too.
Fantastic news! Congrats. I very much enjoyed that story when it appeared for #fridayflash. Well deserved.
That’s terrific news, Dan! I can remember that story – the flash version – from the first time you posted it – it’s fantastic. I can’t wait to read the longer version! Well done 😀
Fantastic, Dan! Congratulations!
Wow! That’s wonderful news, Dan! Congratulations!
Dan – I’m just ecstatic for you. “Half Mown Lawn” is one of those pieces which stays with you long after you read it. Just thinking aboutit gives me goosebumps. It is such a well deserved award for a brilliant story and for your awesomely talented self.
Thanks for the kind words folks. Can’t wait for you to read the full, extended version of the story. I’ll let you know as soon as it sees print.
Well done, it just goes to show what excellent taste us West Country types have.
I’m late to the party, as usual, but wanted to say congratulations, Dan. Even in short form ‘Half Mown Lawn’ was a terrific story. So happy for you.
~jon
Fantastic Dan, well done! I’m very excited for you. What an achievement!
Congrats, Dan! Excellent news!
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